Nakamahazure

First, a few rules:

• I am god of this RP. I reserve the right to change these rules as I see fit at any time and to ask an individual to leave this RP.
  
• No one liners. Posts must be a minimum of 5 sentences.
  
• Do not break posting order. An RPer will not miss his/her "turn" unless they state ahead of time that they will not be able to post and wish for the RP to continue.
  
• Please be literate. Use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. I don't want to read this: "so den chris walkd up to dah guy and was all liek, ehy u, ahmunnafighoo! (I'm gonna fight you)"
  
• This rule pertains to your characters. No two characters may have been sent toNakamahazure for the same reason. I don't want to see 5 arsonists.
  
• Your reasons must make sense. You can't have something like they killed 32 people so they were just sent to the school. A person who murdered 32 people would be sent to prison or a looney bin. Someone can be sent to the school for murder, though it must make sense. Example: The person has split personalities and ended up killing one student, so they were sent to a psyche ward for 2 years and were released under the condition that they attend Nakamahazure.
  

Character sheet (Please follow!):

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(Background pretty much means where they last attended school and what reason they were sent to Nakamahazure for)

Name: Riku Tensei
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 145 lbs
Appearance: Riku stands out quite a bit from other people. His face is smooth and calm, though it doesn't have the warming and cute appearance you are probably imagining. Instead, his face is filled with a dark but shy presence. His teeth are unnaturally pointed, giving him an almost menacing appearance. His lips have 2 black rings on his lower lip, one on each side forming Snake-Bite piercings. His skin is a rather pale color, though in more of a Vampire way than a sick looking way. Starting from under his chin (not on his chin) and going down his neck are black pointed lines, the points ending near the bottom of the neck. The bangs of his hair are long and parted to the right, going only a few inches past his chin. The sides where his side burns are hang down a few inches more than the bangs, touching his shoulders. The back is all spiked up. The color is blonde while the back, tips of the sides, and tips of the bangs are black. His right eye is an intense neon purple while the left is an equally intense neon teal, the pupils are slits like cat eyes. Intensifying the color, Riku wears black eyeliner around his eyes, even covering his eye lids.
Clothing: His upper half wears a zip-up black hoodie. The collar of the hoodie and the bottom edge are outlined with a bit of white fur at the edge. The jacket is open, showing a black and white stripped shirt which is slightly loose on him. Upon the back of the hoodie is the Japanese Kanji for Zetsubou no Kami, or God of Despair in white. The bottom of the hoodie along with the sides of the sleeves are lined with a white tribal print. The right side of the front has katakana going downwards that reads "Riku in Despair." His lower half wears a pair of baggy black pants. They are slightly big, but they seem to have been made this way. The sides of the pants above the knee have pockets, along with the usual pockets at the hips. Starting about 2 inches above the knee and ending right below the knee, the pants are purposely cut open. Black stitches forming Xs go over these areas, but it is obvious that they were not placed there to close the open part of the pants, but rather to decorate them. Around his waste is a black and white checkered studded belt. Starting from his right hip and hanging down over to the left is a white belt with black studds. Starting from his left hip and hanging over to his right is an identical belt, forming an X with the first. His feet wear white shoes. The soles and bottom edge of the sides are black while the top is white. The edge of the top is oultined with a black and white checker print. The shoes have two straps with buckles rather than laces. These buckles are white and have silver studds going across them.
Miscellaneous: Upon his left hand, he wears a fingerless glove that is striped black and dark grey while his write hand holds silver rings on his thumb, index, middle, and ring fingers. His black nails never seem to chip as if it wasn't nail polish, but rather the original color of his nails. Upon the back of his right hand is a dark red tattoo with the Japanese Kanji for Shini, or Death.
Personality: Riku is typically a shy person. He does not often socialize. He is often seen alone in a depressed looking state. He doesn't like company. Deep down, he is rather twisted and sadistic as well. He enjoys causing others torment and suffering whether it be through physical pain or mental distress. It is truly a magnificent feat as to how he can balance conflicting emotions. He is very intelligent

Background: Riku attended a very prestigious school in Kyoto. He was at the top of his class and worked hard. In the hallways of school, he would often stalk girls, mostly one in particular. He would take paths in the hallways that were completely out of his way, just so he could look at this girl. He enjoys causing pain on women and loves the sound of a girl in pain. His stalking rose as he cornered the girl in an alley, pinning her to a wall. He then proceeded to cut her arms with a switch blade knife and bite her neck, as he had had his teeth sharpened. The screams of the girl were overheard and the cops were called, hauling him off to jail. Due to a restraining order, he was not permitted to return to his old school and no school would take him for his criminal record, leaving Nakamahazure as a last resort.

Name:Kazuo Taoka
Gender:Male
Age:17

Height:160cm
Weight:43 kg
Appearance:Kazuo Taoka stands short at only 160 centimeters tall. His face has an intimidating undertone, most like ly from the 2'' scar above his right eye. His hair is a moderate kempt length, not quite reaching his brow; it's black with some blond highlights on the left side. He has only one eyebrow, the left one, because his right never grew back after the scar formed there. His lips are very pale, as if he were to drain the blood from them, releasing all of the color. On his chin is a patch of neatly trimmed black hair. His hands are about average size, but they are calloused and the veins are apparent because they stick out under his tight skin. Kazuo has a toned body, and broad shoulders from working out daily.
Clothing:Kazuo primarily wears a business suit and black dress pants. He sometimes uses sun glasses to hide his scar, but usually in the presence of women.
He also wears a beaded necklace at all times; it looks a bit like something a surfer would wear.
Miscellaneous:Kazuo has 名誉 tattooed on the back of his left shoulder and the symbol for the Yamaguchi-gumi on the inside of his left forearm.
Personality:Taoka is generaly mild mannered, minding his own business. He rarely talks. He is largely indeferent as to what he eats, listens to, or does for entertainment, because his main goal in everything he does is money and power.

Background:Kazuo was born into a wealthy family. His family were kind and loving people, giving him gifts, sending him on vacations, and spoiling Kazuo to the age 12. On Kazuo's 12th birthday his parents bought him many expensive gifts, including his own 5 story building specifically for entertainment. The first floor was an arcade, the second a theater, an the third an anime themed bedroom. Kazou was ecstatic, he loved his gifts and appreciated his parents. He was beginning to wonder how his parents had enough money to buy such expensive things for him all of the time. He knew that his father worked for some big company and that his mother was in foreign affairs with that same company, but he knew that even these such prestigious careers could not pay for everything he was so use to. One day he asked his father "may I come to work with you, I'm curious as to what you do at work. May bee I too can be like you someday father". His father replied "no Kazou, what happens at my work are adult affairs, and soon you will learn the trade, but for now, you are too young". Kazou was angry with his father, he deeply wanted answers about what his father did, how did he make such a large amount of money? The next morning Kazou pretended to be sick, so that he would not have to attend The Academy (Kazou was very bright and whent to a private school in Nagosaka, called The Academy). When his father left for work Kazuo hid in the trunk, which was able to open from the inside due to a safety lever. Upon arrival Kazuo pulled the safety lever releasing himself from the trunk. He was in a massive parking garage where he saw his dad walking thirty feet away. Kazuo followed him up stairs to an office that spanned the entire floor of the building. Because the office was so big kazuo was able to hide in what seemed like an over-sized filing cabinet. He sat and looked out the crack of the cabinet. For hours he watched his dad make and receive phone calls, and periodically someone would walk in and have conversations with his father that were to muffled to hear. After hours of sitting, one particular man walked in and up to his father. They talked for 20-30 minutes before three other men walked in and up behind the man talking with his father. The man in the middle of the three grabbed something from his pocket. Kazou couldn't see what it was. He saw the man raise his arm to the back of the other man's head. Kazou was startled at the sound of a very loud gun shot. He fell out of the cabinet and his father and the other men saw him. The men pointed guns at Kazuo, but his father held out his hand, motioning to the others to lower there guns. "You insisted on accompanying me to my work, did you not?" said Kazou's father. At this point Kazuo realized that his father was a yakuza boss. Kazou got up, ran out of the office, down the stairs and out the door. He spent the next two years of his life living on streets, dealing drugs for money, and eating from the trash. When Kazou was 14 he met a man named Noboru Yamaguchi who happened to be a high ranking member of his father's rival Yakuza-gumi. Noboru Yamaguchi took in Kazou and taught him what he called "The Way". When Kazuo was 16 Noboru Yamaguchi put him back into school, it was a public school; Yamamura Kokusai High School in Saitama. Noboru told Kazuo that it was important to get a good education to become a high ranking yakuza member, or as he called it "moving up in line". At Yamamura Kokusai High School Kazuo continued to do what he did best, he sold drugs under the track field high rise, he was paid by students to fight other students, and in his senior year he hit a teacher with a marble desk. The desk put the teacher in the hospital, severing her spine from her brain. This was when he was sent to Nakamahazure by court order.

Holy shit dude! Did you seriously write that on your own or did you have help? Because it looks like you've been doing this for months xD That's really good actually. The only problem is the part where he hit the teacher with the desk. Severing a person's spine wouldn't get a kid sent to a disciplinary school, but prison instead.